Friday, October 12, 2007

English Gazal

Hi,

Here is an humble attempt to write gazal/Shayri in English
Trying to maintain the radeef, kafia in english is not easy, but can be achieved.
The below Gazal needs more polishing, but here it is, my first attempt !!

I know not

It's a stage, the world, I was taught,
What's the play, and my part, I know not.

I hear each sound, in the neighborhood,
The clamor in my heart, I know not.

Thy love art the balmy radiance of the sun,
Am I in shade or the smart, I know not.

If man art made of clay,
Am I but dirt, living in dirt, I know not.
(NB: dirt here is a reference to dust)

Who shoves me in this hastening crowd,
To whom I give a start, I know not.

Oh the rivers of my fate, generously flow on,
For I am a slave or a dart, I know not.

- Taab

I invite you to post your own English Gazal. Let's start a trend !!

7 comments:

Senty said...

@Sajeet
Thank you so much for visiting my blog...

Thats an awesome poem you've written ! Congradulations...!

Very philosophical... you have a talent. Nurture it.

Please continue to write more. And I would be honoured if you will let me steal your poems for our blog :-)
If you want to, you may paste your poems in
http://senty-musique.blogspot.com/

Yessir.. your blog is gonna be a my fav place to visit.

You mentioned about polishing your poems.... my take is that jo bhi likho, dil se likho, sach likho, thats the most imoprtant thing.

Good luck with your shayari ! Awesome job !

Regards.

Sajeet said...

Merci Bekoup!

Unknown said...

@Sajeet,
I thought I will visit you on your blog. Nicely arranged. Your english ghazal is beautiful. I used to write hindi poetry but have not written a single poem in last 5 years. So keep up the writing work, it is such a creative activity.
With regards,
Rekha

Sajeet said...

RekhaJi,

It is such a pity that you have not written in the last 5 years. I have been through those phases, in fact I write very rarely myself. It is only now that I am collecting bits and pieces of what I have written and trying to consolidate.

I do encourage you to write. It is a fulfilling experience. And when you do write, please let me have the pleasure of reading it.

Cheers

dockaul said...

Great talent.. good output.. Congratulations

BTW The Wallis & Futuna thingie was a fib.. I live in Good Old Swadesh Hindoostan.. Just an example of my eccentric idiosyncrasies. :-)

Regards

Sajeet said...

You got me there Doc !!

Anonymous said...

Hi, enjoyed your postings. Great job. Appreciate if you can sometime write on dreams :-) a humble request.